Dude this was so cool!! I enjoyed how when you click on certain words they appear to be different or add. I think possibly adding sound could add suspense or value to this story. Overall amazing work and i thoroughly enjoyed reading this!
I like how you added commentary after the player dies for the first time. The feature where clicking certain words changes the thoughts of the character was interesting. It could be cool to have it cycle through certain options so you know what you are going to pick ahead of time and make a more conscious choice. I enjoy the fact that this is based on a movie because I have been considering making a game based on a TV show I like. Good job!
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Dude this was so cool!! I enjoyed how when you click on certain words they appear to be different or add. I think possibly adding sound could add suspense or value to this story. Overall amazing work and i thoroughly enjoyed reading this!
I like how you added commentary after the player dies for the first time. The feature where clicking certain words changes the thoughts of the character was interesting. It could be cool to have it cycle through certain options so you know what you are going to pick ahead of time and make a more conscious choice. I enjoy the fact that this is based on a movie because I have been considering making a game based on a TV show I like. Good job!